Tuesday, September 23, 2008

The wonder

I think I will continue with my poems. Since I get loads of comments about them. hehe..

I wonder what lies beyond,
the line that runs along the sea,
the glitter that peers down,
the silence in the night.

I wonder what lies beneath,
the bud that blooms,
the grass that grows,
the fish that fly.

I wonder what lies here,
I ponder why this is,
I see the world so pure,
I hold the power to breathe...

Aww... man! I can't write a very decent poem today... I am so sorry... I can't help feeling somewhat guilty... I don't normally feel this way ever since I became so much LESS observant about human activities.

I don't hear as well anymore and my right ear has a large... large...

I don't really know what it is, but it is oily/wet and it is hard and it hurts everytime I try to peel it off... It doesn't sound like a pimple, more like a really dried ear-shit. Which is also impossible because it is wet/oily...

This is so unscientific... This is so... wierd... I have to get a PHD for biology or something like that... Oh well... Keep sending in your comments and troubles and anything else I can try to help you with...

Oh yeah make sure to check my blog frequently, I'll give some hints on my MOTTO...

Next thing. My previous poem.

I'm trying, obviously, to describe someone(Let's take a random name... Damien) leading another(Another random name... Diana) (probably a lover) into depths of life. but Diana gets lost and is helpless. Damien tries to find her but it is dark (like life, totally unfair)... He continues to search no matter what. Finally dawn breaks and he can see. He can now search for Diana more effectively.

Moral of story(poem, whatever!) : Life is hard, but if you have someone to guide you through it, It's not so bad. This someone can be anybody... Yeah?

1 comment:

Iris said...

it's not to bad really the poem. keep it up!